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  • Tip 1: Subject-Verb Agreement

    The subject and verb must agree in number: both must be singular, or both must be plural.

    In the following examples, the subject is in bold, and the verb is in italics.

    • Subject-verb agreement error: They goes to town. (They is plural, but goes is the third-person singular verb.)
    • Correct: They go to town.
    • Subject-verb agreement error: She go to town. (She is singular, but go is the plural verb.)
    • Correct: She goes to town.

    The simplest way to determine whether a verb is singular or plural is to ask which form of the verb you would use with it and which form you would use with they. It uses singular verbs, and they uses plural verbs.

    • It eats, sleeps, runs, wishes, dreams, hates (singular)
    • They eat, sleep, run, wish, dream, hate (plural)

    Frequently Used Irregular Verbs:

    Regular verbs add ed or d to the present tense form to form the past tense. Many verbs, however, form the past tense and the past participle irregularly. A writer, presenter, or job candidate can quickly appear unprepared and uneducated by choosing the wrong tense of frequently used irregular verbs, especially begin, come, do, and see. Saying these verb forms over and over, especially in the following pattern, can help you become comfortable with the standard, correct forms.

    • I do the work.
    • Yesterday I did the work.
    • In the past I have done the work.
    • I see.
    • Yesterday I saw.
    • In the past I have seen.

    A past participle is preceded by have, has, had, or a form of the verb be (am, is, are, was, were, be, being, been). Here are examples of simple conjugations:

    I dream I dreamed I have dreamed
    you dream you dreamed I have dreamed
    (it, he, she)    
    he dreams he dreamed he has dreamed
    they dream they dreamed they have dreamed
         
    I see I saw I have seen
    you see you saw you have seen
    he sees he saw he has seen
    they see they saw they have seen

    Checking for Subject-Verb Agreement

    Several subject-verb agreement rules that are frequently broken are listed below.

    All the examples in this section are correct.


    1. A subject and a verb must agree even when other words or phrases come between them. Frequently, prepositional phrases come between subjects and verbs. Ignore these prepositional phrases.

    • Example: The group of students is going on a field trip. (The subject is group, so the verb should be is. You should ignore the prepositional phrase of students.)
    • Example: The teacher, along with her students, finds the instructions confusing. (The subject is teacher, so the verb should be finds. You should ignore the prepositional phrase along with her students.)


    2. Subjects joined by 鈥渁nd鈥 usually take a plural verb.

    • Example: Joe and Mary go to town.

    Note: For phrases like each girl and boy or every cat and bird, where the subjects are considered individually, use a singular verb.

    • Example: Each girl and boy in the class has a different story about the field trip.

    Note: Use a singular verb for two singular subjects that form or are one thing.

    • Example: Iced tea and lemon quenches your thirst on a hot day.


    3. Collective nouns are words that refer to groups of people or things; for example, class, jury, family, crowd, and audience. Collective nouns can be either singular or plural depending on the context of the sentence. If the context of the sentence makes you visualize the group doing something together, as one unit, then the noun is singular and takes a singular verb. If the context of the sentence makes you visualize different members of the group performing different actions, then the noun is plural and takes a plural verb.

    • Example: The group agrees that action is necessary. (The group is acting as a unit, so the word group is singular.)
    • Example: The old group have gone their separate ways. (The group members are acting individually, so the word group is plural in this sentence.)

    Note: To avoid awkward-sounding plural collective nouns, place the members of before the collective noun.

    • Example: The members of the old group have gone their separate ways.

    4. Indefinite pronouns that include one, body, or thing require singular verbs. The words each, either, every, much, and neither also require singular verbs.

    • Example: Neither wants to work hard.
    • Example: Everybody knows the answer to that question.


    5. The indefinite pronouns all, any, more, most, none, and some can be either singular or plural, depending on whether the word they refer to is singular or plural.

    • Example: All the money is reserved for emergencies. (Here, all refers to money, which is singular.)
    • Example: All the funds are reserved for emergencies. (Here, all refers to funds, which is plural.)


    6. The indefinite pronouns both, few, many, and several take plural verbs.

    • Example: Both know the answer to the question.

    7. The verb must agree with its subject even when the subject follows the verb. Questions, sentences beginning with here or there, and sometimes sentences beginning with a prepositional phrase place the subject after the verb.

    • Example: Is voting a right or a privilege?
    • Example: Are a right and a privilege the same thing?
    • Example: Playing in the sand were three children and their mother.
    • Example: Here are my birth certificate and passport.
    • Example: There is my coat.


    8. Many nouns ending in -ics (such as economics, statistics, and politics) take singular or plural verbs, depending on how they are used. When these words refer to a course of study or a body of knowledge, they are singular. When they refer to activities or qualities, they are plural.

    • Example: Statistics (a course of study) is the one course Beth failed.
    • Example: The statistics indicate that the demand for American-made products is increasing.


    9. Subjects that look plural (because they end in s) but refer to only one thing are singular.

    • Example: The lens is broken. (The plural of lens is lenses.)


    10. Some nouns (such as glasses, pants, pliers, scissors, and trousers) are considered plural unless they are preceded by the phrase pair of.

    • Example: My glasses need cleaning.
    • Example: This pair of glasses needs cleaning.


    11. A linking verb (usually a form of the verb to be) agrees with the subject (which usually comes before the verb), not the subject complement (which usually comes after the verb).

    • Example: Low wages are the problem.
    • Example: The problem is low wages.

    12. In a dependent clause with a relative pronoun (who, that, which), the verb agrees with the antecedent.

    • Example: I have a friend who studies day and night. (The antecedent of who is the third-person singular noun friend, so the verb in the dependent clause is third-person singular, studies.)
    • Example: Bill bought one of the three thousand cars that have leather upholstery. (The antecedent of that is cars, so the verb is third-person plural, have.)


    13. Titles and words referred to as words take singular verbs.

    • Example: Star Wars is my favorite movie.
    • Example: Children is misspelled in your essay.

    14. With subjects joined by or or nor, the verb should agree with the subject closer to it.

    • Example: Neither the teacher nor the students understand.
    • Example: Either her brothers or Mary mows the lawn.

    Note: For a more natural-sounding sentence, place the plural part of a compound subject second.

    • Example: Either Mary or her brothers mow the lawn.

    Subject-Verb Agreement Exercise

    Subject-Verb Agreement Exercise Answers

     

  • Tip 2: Fused Sentence or Comma Splice

    Tip 2: Fused Sentence or Comma Splice

    Fused Sentence

    A fused sentence (sometimes called a run-on sentence) is an error that occurs when two independent clauses have no punctuation separating them. Fused sentences tend to occur with pronouns and conjunctive adverbs (transitional words or phrases).

    • Fused sentence example: I ate raspberries I developed a rash.
    • Fused sentence example: She ate raspberries her lips were red.
    • Fused sentence example: I ate raspberries therefore I developed a rash.

    Comma Splice

    A comma splice is an error that occurs when two independent clauses are joined with only a comma.
    Comma splice example: I ate raspberries, I developed a rash.

    Note: The comma with the coordinating conjunction may be omitted if the independent clauses are short. Even though the clauses in these examples are short, the commas are included to illustrate standard principles of punctuation.


    Fused Sentences


    1. Check to see if the sentence contains two or more independent clauses.

    2. If the sentence contains two independent clauses, check the way the independent clauses are joined. Acceptable ways to connect independent clauses include:

    • a comma plus a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).
    • a semicolon
    • a colon

    Correcting Fused Sentences


    There are several ways to correct fused sentences like this one:

    • Fused sentence example: I ate raspberries I developed a rash.

    1. Use a period between the two independent clauses to create two sentences.

    • Example: I ate raspberries. I developed a rash.

    2. Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction to create a compound sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries, and I developed a rash.

    3. Use a semicolon to create a compound sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries; I developed a rash.

    4. Use a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb to create a compound sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries; therefore, I developed a rash.

    5. Use a colon between the two sentences if the second sentence explains the first sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries, and I developed a rash: I am allergic to raspberries.

    6. Change the sentence so it no longer contains two independent clauses; for example, use a subordinating conjunction and a dependent clause to create a complex sentence.

    • Example: Because I ate raspberries, I developed a rash.

    Comma Splices

    1. Comma splices are so common that many people think they are correct.

    2. Frequently, the second clause will begin with a pronoun ( he, she, they, etc.) or then.

    • Comma splice example: She ate raspberries, her lips were red.
    • Comma splice example: I ate raspberries, I developed a rash.

    3. Frequently, the second clause (sentence) will begin with a conjunctive adverb (transitional word or phrase).

    • Comma splice example: I ate raspberries, therefore, I developed a rash.
    • Comma splice example: I ate raspberries, however, she did not.

    Checking for Comma Splices

    1. Check to see if the sentence contains two or more independent clauses (sentences).

    2. If the sentence contains two independent clauses, check the way the independent clauses are joined. There are three acceptable ways to connect independent clauses:

    • a comma plus a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).
    • a semicolon
    • a colon

    Correcting Comma Splices

    There are several ways to correct comma splices:
    Comma splice example: I ate raspberries, I developed a rash.

    1. Use a period between the two independent clauses to create two sentences.

    • Example: I ate raspberries. I developed a rash.

    2. Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction to create a compound sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries, so I developed a rash.

    3. Use a semicolon to create a compound sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries; I developed a rash.

    4. Use a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb to create a compound sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries; therefore, I developed a rash.

    5. Use a colon between two sentences if the second sentence explains the first sentence.

    • Example: I ate raspberries, and I developed a rash: I am allergic to raspberries.

    6. Change the sentence so it no longer contains two independent clauses; for example, use a subordinating conjunction and a dependent clause to create a complex sentence.

    • Example: Because I ate raspberries, I developed a rash.

    Note: You use the same methods to correct fused sentences and comma splices because the only difference between a comma splice and a fused sentence is the comma.

    Fused Sentence or Comma Splice Exercise
    Fused Sentence or Comma Splice Exercise Answers

  • Tip 3: Apostrophes

    Apostrophes should be used for:

    1. Contractions

    • Example: She isn鈥檛 (is not) here today.

    2. Possessive forms of nouns and indefinite pronouns (when something is owned by someone)

    • Example: John鈥檚 book is on the shelf.
    • Example: Everyone鈥檚 opinion is important.

    We often do not pronounce the possessive s of a few singular nouns ending in an s, a z , or an x sound; names with more than one s (Moses); names that sound like plurals (Rivers, Bridges); and nouns followed by a word beginning in an s.

    • Example: Moses鈥 mother hid the baby in a basket.
    • Example: Joan Rivers鈥 jokes are usually funny.
    • Example: You are late again, for goodness鈥 sake!

    Usage varies, and the final s isn鈥檛 wrong. Moses's is acceptable.

    Until recently apostrophes were used to form the plurals of abbreviations ( 惭础鈥檚), dates (1980's), and words or characters named as words (颈蹿鈥檚, 补苍诲鈥檚, and 产耻迟鈥檚). Most current texts do not recommend the apostrophe in these cases.

    He earned two MAs in the 1980s.
    My phone number has three 3s [or 3s].
    You used too many ands [or ands] in you speech.
    Note: Underline or italicize a word or a character named as a word, but do not underline or italicize the added s.
    Suggestion: Use an apostrophe to indicate a plural only rarely to avoid confusion.


    Checking for Apostrophe Errors


    An apostrophe will always be placed either before or after an s at the end of a 鈥渘oun owner.鈥

    • Example: The dog鈥檚 collar was too tight. (one dog)
    • Example: The three dogs鈥 collars were too tight. (three dogs)

    The 鈥渘oun owner鈥 will always be followed by what it owns.

    • Example: The dog鈥檚 collar was too tight.
    • Example: The three dogs鈥 collars were too tight.

    To make nouns possessive, first, determine the owner. In these examples, the owner is dog or dogs.

    Next, if the 鈥渘oun owner鈥 is singular, place an apostrophe and an s at the end of the noun.

    • dog 鈥 dog鈥檚

    If the 鈥渘oun owner鈥 is plural, place the apostrophe at the end of the noun. If the plural noun ends in s, do not add another s.

    • dogs 鈥 dogs鈥

    Some plural nouns do not end in s. To form the possessive of plural nouns that do not end in s, add an apostrophe and an s at the end of the noun.
    Examples:

    • men 鈥 men鈥檚 (not mens鈥)
    • children 鈥 children鈥檚 (not childrens')
    • mice 鈥 mice鈥檚 (not mices鈥)

    Some pronouns form their possessive by adding an apostrophe and an s at the end of the pronoun.
    Examples:

    • anybody 鈥 anybody鈥檚
    • everyone 鈥 everyone鈥檚
    • someone 鈥 someone鈥檚

    Personal pronouns do not add an apostrophe to form the possessive.
    Examples:

    • your or yours (not your's)
    • hers (not her鈥檚)
    • ours (not our鈥檚)
    • its (not 颈迟鈥檚)

    Most of these personal pronouns do not cause problems, but some writers incorrectly write 颈迟鈥檚 to show the possessive of it.

    • Incorrect: The dog lost 颈迟鈥檚 collar.

    Note: 滨迟鈥檚 always means it is or it has. Its is the possessive pronoun. The construction 颈迟蝉鈥 does not exist.

    Be careful with compound nouns that are hyphenated. To make a compound noun possessive, add an apostrophe or apostrophe and s to the last word in the compound.

    • Example: The possessive of brother-in-law is 产谤辞迟丑别谤-颈苍-濒补飞鈥檚, but the plural of brother-in-law is brothers-in-law. (For those of you who are curious, the plural possessive is 产谤辞迟丑别谤蝉-颈苍-濒补飞鈥檚.)

    To show joint ownership by two people, add an apostrophe or apostrophe and s to the second noun of the pair.

    • Example: Bob left his mother and father鈥檚 house to go to college.

    If the two members of a noun pair possess a set of things individually, add an apostrophe or apostrophe s to each noun.

    • Example: Bob鈥檚 and Bill鈥檚 cars were stolen last week.

    Apostrophes should not be used to form plurals (more than one).

    • Incorrect: The girls鈥 giggled loudly.
    • Correct: The girls giggled loudly.

    Apostrophes should not be used with verbs that end in s.

    • Incorrect: He sing鈥檚 in the choir.
    • Correct: He sings in the choir.
    • Incorrect: He go鈥檚 to Methodist University.
    • Correct: He goes to Methodist University.

    Note: Perhaps the most controversial and confusing use of apostrophe is with singular nouns that end in an s, an x, or a z. There are two options for forming the possessive if a singular noun ends in these letters. One option is to add an apostrophe after the s. The other option is to add apostrophe and s. Some guides suggest that if a new syllable is formed in the pronunciation of the possessive, writers should add an apostrophe plus s.

    • Example: Phoenix鈥檚 business district is thriving.

    If the addition of an extra syllable would make a word ending in an s difficult to pronounce, writers should add only the apostrophe.

    • Example: New Orleans鈥 restaurants are the best in the world.

    When forming the possessive of any noun ending in an s, always place the apostrophe at the end of the original word.

    • Incorrect: Keat鈥檚 odes are the most beautiful of all English poetry.
    • Correct: Keats鈥檚 odes are the most beautiful of all English poetry.
    • Correct: Keats' odes are the most beautiful of all English poetry.

    Usage varies widely, and standard texts offer many suggestions.

    Remember, English is a living language, and one of its beauties is that it is always changing.


    Apostrophe Exercise

    Apostrophe Exercise Answers

  • Tip 4: Confusing Pronouns: Antecedent Agreement, Vague or Ambiguous Pronoun Reference

    Antecedent Agreement

    A pronoun takes the place of a noun. An antecedent is the word, phrase, or clause to which a pronoun refers.
    In the following example, the antecedent is in bold and the pronoun is italicized.

    • The teacher forgot her book.

    Here her is the pronoun, and teacher is the antecedent.

    Checking for Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement
    Pronouns and antecedents agree in person鈥攆irst ( I, we), second (you), or third (he, she, it, they.) They also agree in gender (masculine, feminine, or neuter) and number (singular or plural). Errors in person and gender are rare, so they won鈥檛 be discussed here. Most pronoun-antecedent agreement errors have to do with number.

    If the antecedent is singular, the pronoun should be singular. If the antecedent is plural, the pronoun should be plural.

    • Pronoun-antecedent agreement error example: The dogs tugged on its leash.
    • Correct: The dogs tugged on their leashes.

    Only in the second sentence does the pronoun (their) agree with the antecedent (dogs). (Both are plural.)
    Except for careless mistakes or typos, students rarely make the kind of error like the one described above. In the next section, we鈥檒l look at the pronoun-antecedent agreement situations that cause students problems.

    The Most Problematic Pronoun-Antecedent Situation

    Most agreement problems arise with singular indefinite nouns (person, student, individual, soldier) and indefinite pronouns (someone, each, anybody, neither). These words are 鈥渋ndefinite鈥 because they do not definitely refer to males, nor do they definitely refer to females. Because they are singular, they are often followed by the singular pronouns 鈥渉is or her,鈥 鈥渉is or hers,鈥 or 鈥渉im or her,鈥 depending on context. Rules are changing, however. Gender neutral plural pronouns such as they, their, or themselves may be a better choice to avoid controversy and stay focused on the message. Plural pronouns are generally  accepted even when they refer to singular antecedents.

    The singular THEY 

    Be careful to avoid sexist language when using singular pronouns.

    Help readers to concentrate on your message instead of your use of singular pronouns. Years ago, a masculine pronoun (his, he) was acceptable when the gender of a noun could refer to either a man or a woman, but that practice became offensive. Don鈥檛 suggest, for example, that all teachers are women or all scientists are men. The singular they (them/their/theirs/themselves) is an emerging trend to avoid labeling people as either masculine or feminine when they may identify as gender fluid or nonbinary, for example. Learn to navigate around this pesky problem with English pronouns.

    Problem:

    Each doctor should bring his registration papers to the meeting.

    (All doctors are not men.) 

    Acceptable alternatives:

    1. Doctors should bring their registration papers to the meeting.
    1. Each doctor should bring registration papers to the meeting.
    1. Each doctor should bring their registration papers to the meeting.

    Notes:

    The last option, which mismatches a singular noun (doctor) and a plural pronoun (their), is acceptable and avoids awkward or sexist communication. Be careful, though, when writing some

    papers, such as formal reports, papers for publication, and employment messages: Know your audience. Consider the first or second option instead.

    Plural pronouns are neither masculine nor feminine in English, so changing the noun to a plural form is usually a good option.

    His or her, his/her options are often awkward, and they can be offensive if a person wants to be gender fluid or gender neutral.


    Vague or Ambiguous Pronoun Reference

    Remember that a pronoun is a word that takes the place of a noun. An ambiguous pronoun reference occurs when 颈迟鈥檚 not clear what noun a pronoun refers to, as in this example:

    • Ambiguous pronoun reference example: The teacher gave the student her notes. (Does the pronoun her refer to the noun teacher or the noun student?)

    A vague pronoun reference occurs in one of two situations: (1) when a pronoun like it, this, that, and which refers to an implied concept or word rather than to a specific, preceding noun; and (2) when a pronoun is used to refer to the object of a prepositional phrase.

    • Example of (1) above: She gave the Red Cross all her money, and this is the reason why she declared bankruptcy. (Here, this refers to an implied concept that could be phrased something like 鈥渢he fact that she gave the Red Cross all her money鈥 rather to a specific noun.)
    • Better: The fact that she gave the Red Cross all her money explains why she declared bankruptcy.
    • Another example of (1) above: Michelle is a shy person, but she keeps it hidden. (Here, it refers to 鈥渟hyness,鈥 and although the concept of shyness is implied in this sentence, the word shyness does not appear in it. Thus the pronoun is referring to a noun that isn鈥檛 there. That鈥檚 not good.)
    • Better: Michelle is a shy person, but she keeps her shyness hidden.
    • A final example of (1) above: Judy 颁辞丑别苍鈥檚 error brought her a lawsuit.
      (Here, her must refer to Judy Cohen. However, although the concept that a person named Judy Cohen exists is implied in this sentence, the actual words Judy Cohen do not appear before the pronoun. 颁辞丑别苍鈥檚 appears, but not Cohen. Thus, again, the pronoun is referring to a noun that isn鈥檛 there.)
    • Better: Her error brought Judy Cohen a lawsuit.
    • Example of (2) above: In the average television drama, it presents a false picture of life. (Here, it refers to drama, and drama is the object of the prepositional phrase 鈥渋n the average television drama.鈥)
    • Better: The average television drama presents a false picture of life.
    • Another example of (2) above: In the directions, they said that the small box should be opened last. (Here, they refers to directions, and directions is the object of the prepositional phrase 鈥渋n the directions.鈥)
    • Better: The directions say that the small box should be opened last.

    Pronoun Exercise
    Pronoun Exercise with Answers

  • Tip 5: Incoherent Sentence: Fragments, Misplaced or Dangling Modifiers, Faulty Predication

    Sentence Fragment


    A fragment is a group of words that is punctuated like a sentence and looks like a sentence but is not a sentence.


    Checking for Sentence Fragments

    • Check to see if the 鈥渟entence鈥 needs a subject.
    • Check to see if the 鈥渟entence鈥 needs a verb.
    • Check to see if the 鈥渟entence鈥 needs both a subject and a verb.
    • Check to see if the 鈥渟entence鈥 is a dependent clause.

    Modifiers

    Misplaced Modifiers

    Misplaced modifiers are words that, because of awkward placement, do not describe what the writer intended them to describe. A misplaced modifier can make a sentence confusing or unintentionally funny. To avoid misplaced modifiers, place words as close as possible to what they describe.

    • Misplaced modifier example: He served pancakes to the children on paper plates. (Were the children on paper plates?)
    • Correct: He served the children pancakes on paper plates.
    • Misplaced modifier example: I saw a rabbit and a raccoon on the way to the airport. (Were the rabbit and the raccoon on the way to the airport?)
    • Correct: On the way to the airport, I saw a rabbit and a raccoon.
    • Misplaced modifier example: He nearly brushed his teeth for ten minutes every night. (Did he come close to brushing his teeth but in fact did not brush them at all?)
    • Correct: He brushed his teeth for nearly ten minutes every night.

    Note: Words like almost, even, exactly, hardly, just, merely, nearly, only, scarcely, and simply should come immediately before the word they modify.
    The following sentences have different meanings because of the placement of only.

    • Only Mr. Brown offered me thirty dollars to mow his lawn. (Mr. Brown was the only person to offer thirty dollars. No one else offered thirty dollars.)
    • Mr. Brown only offered me thirty dollars to mow his lawn. (Mr. Brown offered, but he did not pay thirty dollars.)
    • Mr. Brown offered me only thirty dollars to mow his lawn. (Mr. Brown offered thirty dollars, but I was expecting forty dollars.)

    Dangling Modifiers

    A dangling modifier is a modifier that does not relate sensibly to any word in the sentence. A modifier that begins a sentence must be followed immediately by the word it is meant to describe. Otherwise, the modifier is said to be dangling, and the sentence takes on an unintended meaning.

    • Dangling modifier example: While reading a magazine, my cat sat with me on the porch swing. (Was the cat reading the magazine?)
    • Correct: While I was reading a magazine, my cat sat with me on the porch swing.
    • Correct: While reading a magazine, I sat with my cat on the porch swing.
    • Dangling modifier example: Asked to join the club, we were disappointed by his refusal. (Who was asked to join the club?)
    • Correct: Asked to join the club, he disappointed us because he refused.
    • Correct: When he was asked to join the club, we were disappointed that he refused.

    Faulty Predication


    Faulty predication occurs when the subject and the verb do not make sense together. In other words, the subject can鈥檛 鈥渂e鈥 or 鈥渄o鈥 the verb. (A predicate is the part of the sentence or clause, including the verb, that expresses what the subject is or does.)

    • Faulty predication example: The purpose of movies was invented to entertain people. (The purpose was not invented. Movies were invented.)
    • Correct: The purpose of movies is to entertain people.
    • Correct: Movies were invented to entertain people.

    Faulty predication can also occur when a writer uses the construction is when or is where. Definitions require nouns on both sides of verbs that are forms of be.

    • Faulty predication example: A waterspout is when a tornado is over water. (A waterspout is not a time.)
    • Correct: A waterspout is a tornado occurring over water.
    • Faulty predication example: Anorexia nervosa is where individuals refuse to eat and gradually starve themselves to death. (Anorexia is not a place.)
    • Correct: Anorexia nervosa is a disorder suffered by individuals who refuse to eat and gradually starve themselves to death.

    The construction the reason is because鈥 is redundant. Because means for the reason that, so the reason is because means the reason is for the reason that.

    • Faulty predication example: The reason for low sales is because prices are too high.
    • Correct: The reason for low sales is that prices are too high.
    • Correct: Sales are low because prices are too high.

    Prepositional phrases cannot be the subject of a sentence.

    • Faulty predication example: In the glacier鈥檚 retreat created a valley.
    • Correct: The glacier鈥檚 retreat created a valley.

    Incoherent Sentences Exercise
    Incoherent Sentences Exercise Answers

The Top Five Tips list explains five of the most common errors in English made by college students. Explanations and examples in each section are followed by quizzes with answers to test understanding of the concepts.

Notes on Communication Problems

  • The Top Five list was compiled from the results of ongoing communication assessments and from faculty input. We will make adjustments to the list as we evaluate its effectiveness.
  • All writing and speaking errors will not be covered in the Top Five list. For example, spelling errors demonstrate a lack of attention to detail. You are encouraged to use dictionaries as well as spell checkers when you edit and proofread your own papers.
  • We encourage you to continue to polish your communication skills throughout your career by studying, by listening, by editing your own work, and by paying attention to changes in the language in the years to come.

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Acknowledgement

Thanks to Nancy Alexander and the English Department of Methodist University, Fayetteville, NC, for giving us permission to adapt their Dirty Dozen online tutorial.


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GrammORNot

The helpful critters in this app want you to understand commonly misused words. Your mission, if you choose to accept it, is to select the sentence with the correct usage of the commonly misused word. Incorrect answers will lower your overall score. Follow onscreen buttons to move through the app, and as always, may the grammar odds be ever in your favor!

 

 

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